SS.SGT.SNAKE
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Join date : 2008-02-22
Age : 33
Location : elkin, NC
 | Subject: just some poems.  Sat Apr 19, 2008 2:26 pm | |
| tell me what you think of these.
1) How do you feel now
how do you feel now,
you've broke my heart so reknown.
how do you feel now,
that a lot of things have shown.
how do you feel now,
as i lie here like stone.
how do you feel now,
that i am gone.
2) what is love but a feeling,
while you sit there kneeling,
hoping what you think is not true,
and wishing things don't fall through.
what are you to do when,
things are the way they've never been,
how are you to act,
when you've come to a simple fact,
she doesn't want you,
shes playing games through and through,
shes found someone else its true,
she doesn't need you.
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SS.SGT.CHICK
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Join date : 2008-02-20
Age : 32
Location : U.S.A
| | Subject: Re: just some poems. Mon Apr 21, 2008 1:54 pm | |
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SS.SGT.SNAKE
Posts : 59
Join date : 2008-02-22
Age : 33
Location : elkin, NC
| | Subject: Re: just some poems. Mon Apr 21, 2008 1:59 pm | |
| got another one i wrote this morning. | |
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SS.SGT.SNAKE
Posts : 59
Join date : 2008-02-22
Age : 33
Location : elkin, NC
| | Subject: Re: just some poems. Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:18 pm | |
| 3. what do you do to prove your love,
to the one think as perfect as a dove,
when things go wrong,
you must be strong,
just remember this,
when things are a miss,
when you are trying to prove your love,
to the one as perfect as a dove,
to make sure things go through,
make sure you say i love you. | |
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